1/21 - Well, sorry this is an unexpected end, I wasn't sure if i had enough until i really combed through all the strips this weekend. So yeah, I think i have enough for a syndicate package. Below are all the twenty four strips I plan to use, re-arranged in what i think is a fairly fluid order. Above each one is proposed changes, mostly minor.

So please, feel free to give me one more hit of criticism, of art changes, text changes, spelling errors, of strips you wish I'd dump and strips you wish I'd have kept (the unused ones are all here). Etc.

I hope you've all enjoyed, not only reading the strip, but also watching this particular process of creating a strip.

my best,
-christopher



#1-Madge Eyeing Todd
change to "02"



#2 - Madge gives Shep Twain advice
Update Shep
change to "02"




#3 - HomeEc "chard soup"
change "the teacher" to "mrs. rice"



#4 -HomeEc "iron burn"
change "the teacher" to "mrs. rice"
change punchling to: "well there goes any karmic
chance of getting into my first pick of colleges"



#5 - shep is not a puppy
no changes



#6 - what girls talk about
change to "02"
update Rufus




#7 - a tricky, cute little math problem
change to "02"


#8 - shep gets bullied
change to "02"



#9 - madge talks to Shep's principal
change to "02"
change "our band new volvo" to "one's brand new volvo"



#10 - dating like chasing a tiger
no changes



#11 - a picasso-esque pony
update rufus
make it so you can't see the pony drawing




#12 - artist living in a cardboard box
no changes



#13 - HomeEc- gas masks
move the "and" slightly to the right in madge's last bubble.



#14 - Debate - the judges are too dumb
change to "02"



#15 - Debate - Tag Team Debate
change to "02"



#16 - Madge plays "hard to get"
update Rufus.




#17 - hiding in the bathroom during the dance
change to "02"



#18 - taking his shirt off
change to "02"



#19 - mom would make a good waitress
change to "02"
update shep




#20 - smarter and more popular
no changes.



#21 - the infinite universe
change to "02"



#22 - Soccer - Carmel scores
change to "02"
update Madge's uniform (long sleeve and replace shin pads with knee pads)




#23 - Soccer - Carmel gets beaned
change to "02"
update Madge's uniform (long sleeve and replace shin pads with knee pads)
change Carmel's last line to "wha... what happened? Did we score?"




#24 - weak minded todd.
no changes.