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Initial negotiations are not off to a great start.
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Audri went aboard Thoos’s ship and found them on the bridge. Thoos said, “Oh good, it’s you. I was asked to let you approach me first. I know you’ve been enjoying my body, but now you have to give it back.” Shocked, Audri said, “What do you mean ‘Now I have to give it backi?! How?!” Annoyed and put out, Thoos said, “I don’t care how! Even if we can’t brain-switch back, it’s mine. Maybe we can figure out a way for me to mind-control you or something.” Audri said, “No. No. And no! What the hell?! Thoos, we’re all in the same boat. I want my body back as well.” Thoos counter-argued, “Come on. You must have a price. Everyone has a price.” Upset, Audri said, “What good is money if I’m being mind-controlled by some rich self-centered creep?!” Taking a sip from their drink, Thoos said, “Blatz if I know, but you’d be amazed at what poor people will to do for money.” Annoyed, Audri walked away, saying, “I’m going to bed.”
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OK, first, you need to find the mad Tithonan scientist who did this to you in the first place, if anyone can undo it it’s them. And second, “will to do for money.” is insanity creating bad grammar! Lose the “to”, please.
“will to do for money” sounds like it started as “are willing to do for money” then being rephrased more concisely as “will do for money” but the “to” was forgotten about.