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Lasper’s been spending too much time around Rodrigo.
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So, a few people commented on how Napforth got through all the doors when Rodrigo stole their keycard. I think it’s a fair point, so I adjusted the text. ALSO, since none of Val, Lasper, or Gerek appeared on the rest of the page people were confused when they re-appear. They were simply off-panel, but again, I think it’s a fair point. So I redrew panel 4. Anyhow, it’s in the archive HERE, but these are the edits I did:
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-Raising the syringe, the medic said, “Okay, you’ll feel a little prick.” Then Picknar leapt in and tackled the medic, saying, “That’s my body, you stinking lewarkin dung!” The guard from the previous room said, “Wait a second. What the blatz is going on here? And where’s my gun?” Holding a gun, Lasper said, “I pickpocketed it. This is a jailbreak.” Spizz said to Lasper, “That’s impressive, but I pickpocketed a gun too. Wait a second, where is it?” Holding out two guns, Lasper said, “I pickpocketed your pickpocketed gun as well.” Lasper then turned to Val and said, “My dearest Val. We came to save you. I love you.” Miffed, Picknar said, “Actually… we came to get Loomp. We’re only getting you two because we were already here.” Lasper said to Val, “I love you with all my heart, like I have loved no other.” Val said, “This is a wicked badass jailbreak, Lasper. don’t kill the vibe.”
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Nicely done, Christopher! I love the interaction you have with your commenters.