Next on the editorial trail were Cedra Wood, a painter, and Fred, a science teacher. I originally met Cedra online when I was casting about for ideas for my experimental comic project Water Street, and Cedra tossed me over a half dozen ones which were spot on. As good a basis of friendship of any I know.
Cedra and Fred were, as well, in the last phase of editing. I really enjoyed their remarks, both from the critical to the enthusiastically amused. Thanks you two!